
My picture is the one on the left. I like my picture alot better than his. First because mine is clear and you can see every little wire on the tower! Second, because its not all in-line, and third i think it is more interesting than the standard whole view of the Eiffle Tower where you see the tip to the base on the ground! I believe that my picture makes the viewer curious as to what is below the edge of the picture. Also I think I did a very good job using line. Yes its the EIffle Tower, but I think i did a good job making the tower itself if focus, and the sky not as in focus. What do you think I did strongly and weekly in this photo? How could i have improved it?

I like the view that you have on this piece. I think what you could have done to improve this pice and emulate your artist better, is mabye blurring your picture.
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